24.6.10

Sebait Hidup

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saya cuma tetes mani jadi nutfah
lalu berenang dalam ketuban

saya cuma seonggok daging telanjang
menghisap hidup dari dada ibu

saya cuma anak panah pemalu
melesat dari busur ayah tapi tak kuasa jauh

saya cuma wajah bersebum
timbunan hasrat di balik lembar buku

saya cuma nafas lembab di pelukan kekasih
satu jari menggores hati di dahi

 





malam basah jejak hujan | 24 Juni 2010 | 21:21 WIB
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18 comments:

  1. ema ramayangfiJune 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM

    widiiihh,. dahsyat bbetuullll... mantap om,..

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  2. fickle boonJune 24, 2010 at 9:35 PM

    keeeeeeeeeerrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeennn

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  3. lintang melatiJune 24, 2010 at 9:39 PM

    kerenn mas badaiii.. lagiii..lagiii... :P

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  4. ardy nebulaeJune 24, 2010 at 9:39 PM

    Hujan selalu meninggalkan sebait cerita :)

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  5. rieska wulandariJune 25, 2010 at 12:25 AM

    Horeeeeeeeeeeeee..
    Ajarin dooonggg...

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  6. aan rahmanJune 25, 2010 at 12:38 AM

    jempol empat....

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  7. Sri Sarining DiyahJune 25, 2010 at 2:09 AM

    muantapppp

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  8. Octonine .June 25, 2010 at 5:17 AM

    Simbolisnya keren...

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  9. "$4n $4n" ADRJune 25, 2010 at 9:02 AM

    makanya kukunya dipotong... nakal. *nyodorin mercurohrum*

    *puisinya keren kak aldi, ini yg nilai pujangga angkatan balai pustaka loh :D*

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  10. Rizky FirmansyahJune 25, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    5 bintang buat badai

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  11. kania knightlyJune 25, 2010 at 10:09 AM

    ckckkckckkckck 10 jempol!!

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  12. Diar RahmaJune 25, 2010 at 10:54 AM

    saya cuma setitik debu
    yang lebur dengan tanah ketika tiba saatnya

    *uhhhuuuuyyyyy... nyamberrrr ... *

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  13. Gregorius Agustus RadixJune 25, 2010 at 11:10 AM

    ;)

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  14. Sayang KamuJune 25, 2010 at 11:25 AM

    Bagus, ini dari pencinta sastra yang gak bisa bikin karya sastra.

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  15. yelli ordinary peopleJune 25, 2010 at 2:16 PM

    kereen

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  16. Azhar SaifulJune 25, 2010 at 9:22 PM

    ih pornooo

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  17. ' Badai 'June 27, 2010 at 9:42 PM

    makasih teman-temin semua :)

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  18. astrid saraswaty dewiJune 29, 2010 at 6:59 PM

    plok plok plok
    ngebayangin Aldi bacain ini dengan penuh penjiwaan

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